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Going Forward With Intrigue

23 Sep

I’ve been MIA–but for a good reason.  I joined a Writers Group led by Gloria Kempton.We post our chapters/scenes, then critique each others’ work in sub-groups. Next, Gloria critiques our submissions using her writing expertise and knowledge. She “tells it like it is.” That is, Gloria tells you what you did well and provides suggestions in the areas you need to strengthen or fix.

Because of the positive and honest feedback I’ve been receiving, I’m currently performing major editing (actually rewriting) surgery. I plan on submitting more bites  in the near future. But for now I will focus more on going forward with the novel known as Intrigue.

Intrigue: From LA to Casablanca

 

 

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DAY 6: INTRIGUE, Chapter 1: Post #006

8 Sep

How did I just let an enticing man like that go? I’ve always had a weakness for foreign men. My overseas boyfriend Franco lived in the Philippines. I was going to see him during winter break.

But Adam was a gentleman. Whenever he opened a door, he’d let the ladies go through first. Not arrogant like those frat boys. He always said “Good morning, please and thank you to everyone.” Even if other students were rude, stressed out or hung over.

DAY 5: INTRIGUE, Chapter 1: Post #005

1 Sep

I needed to walk home before it was dark. The neighborhoods around USC weren’t very safe, especially after sunset. As I was leaving the campus, I heard footsteps running up behind me. I turned around and saw Adam.

“You should take the tram instead of walking. I’ll walk you home.” He grinned ear to ear.

“That’s okay. I only live three blocks away.” I kept walking.

“One step outside this campus and you’re in the South Central war zone.”

“You’re right.”I stopped walking. “I live at Troy Hall. Is that too far for you?”

“Not at all. Let’s get you home safely.”

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The next day in King Hall, Adam and I worked together again; doing the same monotonous thing.

Checking students in.

Checking students out.

Charging them for their printouts. A Greek fake-bake complete with fake blond hair caused a commotion  because I charged her $2.00 for printouts that she screwed up. I wanted to tell her to hire a tutor, but I kept my mouth shut instead.

When would this shift end?  I wanted to get out of this fluorescent lit, refrigerated office. I should have brought a sweater and mittens.

Finally 4:00 o’clock arrived.

Adam and I left together. We headed towards the tram stop.

While we were waiting, He casually said, “Would you like to go out to dinner and see a movie this weekend?”

God, Adam was handsome. But I still had my heart set on Franco. He was the ladies’ man I wanted but couldn’t have.

“I’m sorry Adam, but I already have a boyfriend,” I lied.

He flinched, but recovered quickly “That’s okay. Maybe another time.”

“Yeah. Okay” was all I could manage.

“See you around.” He turned on his heel and walked away.

DAY 4: INTRIGUE, Chapter 1: Post #004

29 Aug

That afternoon, I reported to work at King Hall Computer Center. When I walked in, my eyes riveted on a muscular, bronzed Arab who stood behind the check out counter. This lean, long legged god possessed a sharp, straight nose and a tight ass.

Three eager coeds were chatting with him in French. His golden complexion and mop of glorious black curls brought out his angelic brown eyes. “Where did you come from?” I said under my breath.

During the lulls, Mr. Stud asked me questions like: Do you play tennis? Do you normally work at the King Hall? And, do you like the Pet Shop Boys?

I answered his questions with: Yes, but I suck at it. Actually, I usually work at Taper Hall. And, yes I like the Pet Shop Boys.

When we finished our shift for the day, we walked outside together. A crisp breeze brushed against my face lifting my bowlish blond hair up into the air. He was definitely of Arabic decent. What country he was from?

As we passed by the student fitness club he said, “I know you from somewhere.”

“You do?”

“Yeah. Where did I meet you?” He inquired.

My mind raced. I didn’t remember meeting him unless I danced with him at a disco or met him at a party. I shrugged my shoulders. “I don’t know.” I hoped that I had not done something foolish in the past and forgotten about it.

He said, “My name is Adam.”

“Hi Adam, I’m Stevie.”

“Your parents actually named you Stevie?”

Not funny, I thought. “No. My real name is Stephanie. But Stephanie is too stuffy. I prefer Stevie.” I point to myself. “Stevie’s more adventurous.”

“Adventurous. Wow. I thought maybe you were in show biz.”

“Yeah. Thanks.” We stopped walking. “How long have you been at USC?” I asked.

“Too long,” he replied.

This was becoming awkward. I looked down at my watch. “Well Adam, I gotta run. Nice working with you today.”

He replied, “You too.”

Please Welcome My New Persona, Jane Smart

27 Aug
Photo of keyboard and pen

Photo of keyboard and pen (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

I’ve been wrestling with coming up with a pen name for a while.  I decided that if I create a new persona and give myself a pen name, it would free up my writing.

Now I won’t have to worry about offending anyone should they recognize themselves in any upcoming works–they won’t be able to make the connection.  I still need to work out the logistics, but I figured why not? I’m certainly not the first nor the last to do this.  On that note, please welcome up and coming novelist, Jane Smart.

Jane Smart: I’m taking over this blog effective immediately, August 27, 2012. My other personality, Janet will be working behind the scenes while I hammer out this novel and get it published. At last I can speak my mind! I can let loose my creativity. I can play and manipulate words, scenes and stories.

                     Here’s to MY novel, Intrigue.

 

 

The Birth, Growing Pains & Fruition of INTRIGUE: A Novel Blog

22 Jul
Blog Machine

Blog Machine (Photo credit: digitalrob70)

 After doing some research, I’ve decided that I will blog my novel after all. I plan on taking what I’ve previously blogged and break it down into smaller chunks and go forward from there.

WARNING: This is raw material–it’s supposed to be that way.

As I get ideas and worthwhile feedback from you and my muses’ (I have three), I will incorporate these and other surprises into my physical book. If you’re thinking about blogging your book, check out Nina Amir’s Book  How To Blog a Book at: http://howtoblogabook.com

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